I do love a story that surprises me with a subtle twist, something that will grip you and change your thoughts on where the story is going. There are the usual ones like the main villain of the story ends up being the hero. And An important character ends up having a hidden dark past. Also, A character’s dark past finally catches up with them.
I thought I’d share a few ideas I have seen recently. First, the heroine uses her boyfriend’s spare key to enter his apartment. Climbed into his bed in the dark and started kissing him. Only to find she is in bed with her boyfriend’s brother, who is using the apartment while the hero is in town on business.
Another, a man that has been visiting the heroine each day during the summer at her private beach house. They spend many hours making mad, passionate, inventive, love with the twist at the end that he is a ghost.
Our hero sees his girlfriend from behind in the crowded, dark bar. They are in a long-term relationship. She has long blond hair and is wearing a slinky satin dress, swaying to the seductive music. Our hero, wanting to surprise her, comes up behind the woman and kisses her neck. He rubs himself against the lady, and they both feel the sparks between them. She turns round to kiss our hero to discover that she isn’t the heroine.
When finally clearing out his things, a wife finds a letter from her departed husband left in his desk. It has a coded message that only she can decipher. Was he murdered by the man that is now her boyfriend?
The hero finally gets the chance for revenge but to take it will cost him the woman he loves.
The heroine falls in love with a seemingly perfect handsome man, only to discover she has fallen in love with an alien.
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